Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Writing Wednesday

Narrative Writing-
We have been writing personal narratives in Writer's Workshop! (Stories about us)
Today the students chose a story from their writing folder that needed improvements. They added punctuation, capitalization, time cue words, important information, or details where needed. Here are some of our stories!
"First me and my mom went to the MOSH. I learned history. I learned history about a humans body. I had a good time." -Brady



"First I go to play with my pet. I throw a ball. He threw the ball I had a fun day today. I went in to have more fun! I danced with my brother. My mom told me and my brother we dance good and I was happy too!"
- Donavin

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